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BassMac · 01-03-2012, 06:14 PM

Thanks for your critique. I have been wanting to improve on items 2 and 4 for sure. I also would be hesitant to purchase from this site at this time knowing what I know. I am trying to clean it up, but I am using the site as a way to hopefully drive traffic to my store, which is quite generic still, but highly professional looking(that is where I sell my products and services). I am sure your likely clicked to it at some point and would agree.

My Target audience is people who are new to the web and to the idea of having their own site. I am attempting to make this site as informative as possible over time, but in a way that people who are not technicaly informed can understand(simple English if you will). My hopes are that by giving them the confidence to give it a shot, they will navigate to my store to purchase all they need to start their own site.

Again, thank you for your time and well written critique.

01-03-2012, 06:14 PM	#3
BassMac Registered User Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Texas Posts: 24	Thanks for your critique. I have been wanting to improve on items 2 and 4 for sure. I also would be hesitant to purchase from this site at this time knowing what I know. I am trying to clean it up, but I am using the site as a way to hopefully drive traffic to my store, which is quite generic still, but highly professional looking(that is where I sell my products and services). I am sure your likely clicked to it at some point and would agree. My Target audience is people who are new to the web and to the idea of having their own site. I am attempting to make this site as informative as possible over time, but in a way that people who are not technicaly informed can understand(simple English if you will). My hopes are that by giving them the confidence to give it a shot, they will navigate to my store to purchase all they need to start their own site. Again, thank you for your time and well written critique. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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