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If you get a second, can you please review my site?
Hello all, just launched my first site; had some help from Squarespace, but I'm still diligently reading through my HTML and CSS books. Have a lot to learn.
Any feedback would be appreciated!
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Excellent job! I love the typography that you are using throughout the site. The parallax sections look good too and, most importantly, the text overlaying those sections is easy to read. Far too often people overlook the legibility of the text. The 3d eye model is a really cool feature too. The 2 critiques that I have are a slow loading time for the background video and some of the navigation text is hard to read on some pages (contact lenses for example). I would compress the video quite a bit more. Yes, it will be lower quality but it is a background element so the focus should be on the text anyway. You might also want to give the header an opaque color to make the text more legible or maybe you can tweak the images or text color to make the links stand out a little bit more. Great job though!
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Thank you for the critiques, it is very much appreciated. I will go to work on the site with your advice in mind.
Many thanks, -R
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Okie, It's a great site
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