There are some tips which I can suggest hope they would be useful to you -
1.Avoid redundancy
2.Use some synonyms or if you some word for it then use it.
3.If you are suggesting something then it should be "your" instead of "our"
4.Suggesting what you are there to do so waste your time on commanding the user.
5.This is all depends on how strong your words are.If you use common used words in your writing that would not help just use your vocabulary to use some strong word which can hit users mind.
6.If your are writing about something than you should make user think,like let them ask something so you can answer their questions
like these there are more tips I can give by using them you can
make money online by writing nice contents but for now I think they are enough and remember if your contents are good then you are able to make some money