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bidsbypros · 02-20-2013, 02:04 PM

Thanks for the opportunity. The simpler the better. I personally like the simplicity of the site. The picture is inviting and the site's speed is perfect. Your ranking in Alexa, although very irrelevant is high, which you don't need alexa to advertise anyway. The sharpness of the site get A+ because it is reach and inviting yet easy to use.
In my personal opinion, I'd switch the first sentence negative to positive first to encourage the reader to continue. When you start your sentence with "you are not the riches or the most beautiful..." it might turns a reader into an offensive side. I would say the positive fist by stating "you may not be the poorest or ugliest ..." But that just maybe your way of catching their attention.
Good luck and hope it gets to the top
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02-20-2013, 02:04 PM	#2
bidsbypros Registered User Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 12	Thanks for the opportunity. The simpler the better. I personally like the simplicity of the site. The picture is inviting and the site's speed is perfect. Your ranking in Alexa, although very irrelevant is high, which you don't need alexa to advertise anyway. The sharpness of the site get A+ because it is reach and inviting yet easy to use. In my personal opinion, I'd switch the first sentence negative to positive first to encourage the reader to continue. When you start your sentence with "you are not the riches or the most beautiful..." it might turns a reader into an offensive side. I would say the positive fist by stating "you may not be the poorest or ugliest ..." But that just maybe your way of catching their attention. Good luck and hope it gets to the top Bids By pros __________________ Bids By Pros is a social platform to post and share what you need and connects local professionals to bid on your service request. 1. Sign up FREE and create a profile 2. post your need and share with friends 3. receive answers and bids To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.